Very good fic! I loved every part of it.
Dorian is really in character: you described very well the changes he made over the years. This is a really interesting story, I'd say: the style is involving and fluent: you never get bored reading it :-) I enjoyed it very much. Can't wait for more of your stories!
My best wishes. Annalisa.
Author's Response:
Hi Annalisa - thanks! Happy that you liked the story. More soon.
best, Lorna