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Reviewer: Salome Wilde (Signed) [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2008 13:05 | Title: The Major Has A Plan

Your writing is excellent; you persuade me entirely that this situation is conceivable and its result inevitable.  I'm not personally drawn to the idea of a longterm open bond between the men (I love the tension, first-time stories, and ongoing conflict), but you draw the reader in and take us for a wonderful ride.  Thank you!

Reviewer: mint (Anonymous) [Report This]
Date: 30/12/2006 22:56 | Title: The Major Has A Plan

i really do love this story, it's most likely one of my favorites! so well done in charater and plotting! good work! ^_^

Author's Response:

How nice of you to say so. Thank you.

Reviewer: The Reverand (Signed) [Report This]
Date: 14/07/2006 10:24 | Title: The Major Has A Plan

Frightening and delightful. :)

Author's Response: Many thanks.

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