Wow, I'm speechless! I absolutely loved this! You told one of your reviewers you don't write yaoi; that's right. Yaoi can be really... I mean really cheesy sometimes.
Well, your story is well-written, and believable. I can imagine them going through something like this.
Keep up the good work!
Nice in fact very nice
Nice! Very well written.
Author's Response: Thank-you. Your review is much appreciated.
oh THAT was good! "Show me"- just perfect ^ ^
The writting was natural, the sex beautiful... I'm just gonna go read the sequel now. THANK YOU!
Very enjoyable fic. I love how it manages to be suspensful, humerous, frightening, lovely, and very sexy, too. A very fine story.
Author's Response: Many thanks. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.