Is Dorian ashamed of himself because he slept with Z, and that's why he ran away? I hope that's it... Because if it's going to be a Z/Dorian story, I'm like, nope, if Klaus isn't going to be happy.
Reviews For Finland is also a vast place
I love the mood and atmosphere of this story. I hope you get a chance to continue it at some point - I'm really intrigued by what you've got written so far.
... and now anything could happen! I like your careful, detailed style, making the reader look at each small detail. It adds to the sense of Dorian being stuck in enforced stillness on the train. This piece would make a great opening for a story. I'd love to know what happens next! (Do you think you will write more and tell us?)
Author's Response: More will follow, I assure. Though there will be a gap before the next instalment. This is due to the fact that I am slow.