Cute. Well paced.
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Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) [Report This]
Date: 22/10/2009 02:31 | Title: AU2 Feet Of Clay
Date: 22/10/2009 02:31 | Title: AU2 Feet Of Clay
Insert incredibly HUGE "Awwwwwwwwwww" Right here!!!
I am so glad it ended like that, AT FIRST I thought Klaus was purposing and I nearly died. But, the ring and the sentimental words.... I died then too, but in a very good way.
I want to point out that you are an amazing writer, and I was hanging on every word for both the prequel and this sequel.
You personify Klaus and Dorian so PERFECTLY I feel like they could possibly make some effort to come together after such a long time.
Though, your best work ... in my opinion, has still got to be House of Cards. Despite continuing, everything was mind-numbingly fantastic.
"At the risk of sounding foppish" d'awwhh. Haha.
;D <33
Continue to write incredibly, I eat it up. Haha.
Reviewer: Carmella (Anonymous) [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 09:42 | Title: AU2 Feet Of Clay
Date: 11/10/2009 09:42 | Title: AU2 Feet Of Clay
I...that was just too cute~ I had a feeling that in the beginning when I was reading it he had a ring for Dorian <3 ten years I mean come on ring time! lol. but anyway! I loved the story :) The idea was very interesting to me and I enjoyed reading both part one and the sequel.
Reviewer: Carmella (Anonymous) [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 07:41 | Title: AU2 Feet Of Clay
Date: 11/10/2009 07:41 | Title: AU2 Feet Of Clay
Hello, I read your previous story to this on another website. Belladona I think that's what it was called. I was absoutly floored, and in love with the story, not to mention the pairing. Of course, I love them very much. I'm quite sad by Dorian's amnesia, although, these storys are well-written and well thought out. I'm very pleased reading it. I am looking forward to reading the rest, right now, but I thought I should leave my thoughts so far :)
The ending was good! I was guessing all the way through. I'm not sure if this was the kind of comment you were hoping for, given the nature of the story, but I thought it was very sexy, all the same.
*snickers* Nicely written, 'Lord Gloria'. XD
Fantastic little piece of smut you have here. :3 Loved it! Especially at the beginning when Dorian catches the two. Oh, his fury was very real to me. *nods* Scary man when angry...
Wow, I'm speechless! I absolutely loved this! You told one of your reviewers you don't write yaoi; that's right. Yaoi can be really... I mean really cheesy sometimes.
Well, your story is well-written, and believable. I can imagine them going through something like this.
Keep up the good work!
*snorts* oh my god XD well that's for sure a happy death, but poor Klaus, poor, poor Klaus xD
Reviewer: Kohaku Imaki (Anonymous) [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 17:54 | Title: This Never Happened
Date: 03/05/2008 17:54 | Title: This Never Happened
Oh! Margaret you're the best! Just love your writing.
Carol
Reviewer: Kohaku_Imaki (Anonymous) [Report This]
Date: 16/04/2008 22:04 | Title: What Advice Do You Have?
Date: 16/04/2008 22:04 | Title: What Advice Do You Have?
Love this, I think of all of your Fiction it's one of my favorites. I'm not good about reviewing the fics I read.
Carol
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